So originally I did this non-futa style. Then I decided to add the wang.
But when i saved it, I accidently saved over the layer file so now I just have this version saved.
Maybe Kyodai will end up a futa?
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This is my more adult oriented gallery. Stuff you won't find on my deviantart gallery.
The head of the penis itself looks a bit mis-shaped due to the change in line width. This makes the rest of her penis looks odd compared to the rest of it.
ReplyDeleteAs for contemplating on making Kyodai a full-on hermaphrodite, I'm fine with whatever decision you embark on.
You have my total support for her to become a full futa.
ReplyDeleteI corroborate with what Moonvamp said in terms of the penis so I won't add much more, only on how it's tending to make a U shape with the curvature looks strange. By my knowledge, the male member can bend slightly at the tip, not right smack in the middle, specially that way.
My criticism, if it is valid, is how you do your muscle expansion. Generally your characters grow substantially in height at the same time, yet internally they don't seem to be proportionate.
What I mean is how arms and legs elongate as they muscle up, but areas like the head maintains the same size, making the head-body ration become unbalanced. Tiny head, huge body.
Of course, it might be on purpose but for example Maruchiro also does muscle expansion sometimes (Ie, http://maruchiro.h.fc2.com/090623_3.html) and he prefers to maintain the girl's height, only changing the width in the muscles. That way the effect of the expansion is more substantiated.
I'm sorry if I always have something to nitpick at. I don't want to be just condescending with your art, even if you're one of my favorite artists. ^^;
Well, she certainly has the counterbalance in the rear to support it! XD One must think of balance, after all.
ReplyDelete@ Divinegon: thanks for the critique. I did do the head smaller to make the muscles more immense. I'll try to keep things in proportion next time and see how things work.
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